Some people think that money is the most important factor in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without money? What other factors contribute towards happiness?

Many are of the view that

money

brings enjoyment to every individual.

Therefore

, we cannot think and proceed

further

without

money

.

This

means we need

money

every

then

and now.

First

and foremost,

money

acts as an essential part

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our lives. We can see the grinning face of every person with earning potential.

This

means working people are heavily investing

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time and effort. Admittedly,

such

people do not pay attention to unnecessary distractions.

Additionally

, not everyone has the ideal earning potential and capability.

This

means some do very well at a younger age while others do better

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later in life.

Likewise

,

this

concept needs

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alarming awareness among the youth. So that

young

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generation does not have the experiences of deprivation.

On the other hand

, having

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low probability of earning and saving can result in anxiety or depression.

Thus

, some are traumatized to work under the control of peer pressure. Certainly, no reward is given to

such

locals if failing at a particular career path early in life.

Hence

, pieces of modest failure become less transcendent.

For example

, failing to impress the known ones with

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amount of presents of one’s earned

money

can make oneself feel friendless and hopeless. For

this

purpose, some may think that intellectuals with no work or salary have a bad impression on society

in particular

.

For example

, fresh graduates having no respectable jobs will be treated poorly.

Consequently

, they have missed the opportunities by

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. Giving up dream jobs and committing suicide are rare instances.

In other words

, unlikely results of earning

money

foreclose future success. One can make his/her loved ones and the

neighborhood

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with what they have.

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,

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young people are hanging out with

family

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to

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restaurants on

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special day.

In addition

, one can help the poor when in need. So that

this

good quality can be passed over to the

next

generation. Studying, working, thinking and behaving well

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of the actions done towards safer, lucrative positions. In conclusion, being happy does not always give us excitement and pleasure. So

money

has some degree of success in terms of job satisfaction.