Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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Eating
meat
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or not is always a controversial topic. Some
people
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prefer being a vegetarian
than
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eating
meat
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because they believe in no
creulty
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cruelty
to animals and
also
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it keeps them fit. According to
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meat eaters
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meat-eaters
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,
people
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who rely on
vegetables
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only, do not get enough nutrition and in long
term
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they will face vitamin deficiency.
For example
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, having a grilled fish or grilled chicken is more advantageous than having
saute
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sauteed
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vegetables
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with bread.
Taste wise
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also
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people
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opt for non-veg
food
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and it is a belief that there are diversities in
meat
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receipes
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recipes
while
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vegetables
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vegetable
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dish has very
less
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fewer
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varieties. In most
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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countries,
non vegetarian
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non-vegetarian
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food
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is easily
availble
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available
,
that
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which
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results
into
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in
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make
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making
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people
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start eating
meats
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meat
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. Even cost wise if we compare, a chicken burger from Mc
donald
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Donald
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is cheaper than a
vegetbale
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vegetable
sandwitch
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sandwich
.
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, there are
people
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who believe in eating
meat
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is the cruet thing
to
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for
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animals. As per their thinking, we cant kill living things to feed the human. Killing more animals like fish and cow affect
environment
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the environment
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too.
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, eating
meat
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increases
the
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apply
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cholestral
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cholesterol
and blood pressure at
certain
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a certain
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age due to the fact that it contains fat. While only having
vegetables
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will not gain weight or cause any health issues compared to
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meat eaters
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meat-eaters
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.
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, according to
survey
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the survey
a survey
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,
people
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live longer who consumes
food
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without any
meat
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than
who
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those who
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does.
A
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country like India, where 80%
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people
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of people
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are vegetarian and they even worship a cow so they do not even think of eating it. In conclusion, there are no
such
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benefits of eating
meat
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while consuming vegetable
food
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not only keeps the human fit but
also
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save the world in terms of
environment
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the environment
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Plant-based diet
  • Chronic diseases
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Deforestation
  • Water consumption
  • Mitigate climate change
  • Natural resources
  • Animal welfare
  • Humane and ethical choice
  • Healthcare costs
  • Sustainable farming
  • Legumes
  • Fruits and vegetables
  • Vegetarian
  • Vegan
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