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Topic: Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In contemporary times environmental hazards have become inevitable due to numerous reasons. Few people argue that
most
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 problematic is the declining population of some pertinent species of flora and fauna whereas some are of an opinion that there
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 more dominant
issues
 which pose threat to our
environment
.
This
 essay will analyze and discuss both arguments and
then
 I will provide my opinion.
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the
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first
sight
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 our
environment
 is dependent on the balance created by different species collectively.It is connected by
series
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a series
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 of
food
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the food
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chain
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 and
food
web
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 and which explains the dependency of
one
 species on another. If
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one
specie
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species
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 is on
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the verge
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extinction
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of extinction
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 or endangered
then
 an imbalance will occur in the
environment
 which will prove detrimental.
For instance
 , in a
food
 chain plants are placed at the
first
 strata which is the main producer of
food
 and herbivores and dependent on them for survival,
then
 carnivores feed on herbivores and plants both. If any
one
 of them is going to be endangered
then
 the whole
food
 chain will be in danger and
hence
 our
environment
.
Therefore
this
 is
one
 of the major environmental
issues
. On the other
side
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 there are numerous other
issues
which
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that
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consequently
 harm our ecosystem.
One
 among them is rising pollution.The gift of
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the industrial
 revolution to our
environment
 is the climbing rate of pollutants in the air, water, soil. These pollutants like chlorofluorocarbons, methane, sulphur and many more
subsequently
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 rise to global warming.Another alarming reason to be considered is increased deforestation. Owing to rapid urbanization and increasing population more forest area is to be cleared in order to satisfy the basic needs of people like
building
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the building
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 of houses and fuel etc. In conclusion, keeping in mind both the opinions aforementioned above
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 my opinion, there are uncountable reasons for increasing environmental
issues
 but pollution is
one
 reason which is the root cause of all environmental problems from which other
issues
 propagate and it is in hands of human civilization to reduce it as much as possible for a healthy living
environment
.
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