Topic: Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In contemporary times environmental hazards have become inevitable due to numerous reasons. Few people argue that

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problematic is the declining population of some pertinent species of flora and fauna whereas some are of an opinion that there

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more dominant

issues

which pose threat to our

environment

.

This

essay will analyze and discuss both arguments and

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I will provide my opinion.

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first

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our

environment

is dependent on the balance created by different species collectively.It is connected by

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of

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the food

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chain

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and

food

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and which explains the dependency of

one

species on another. If

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is on

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extinction

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or endangered

then

an imbalance will occur in the

environment

which will prove detrimental.

For instance

, in a

food

chain plants are placed at the

first

strata which is the main producer of

food

and herbivores and dependent on them for survival,

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carnivores feed on herbivores and plants both. If any

one

of them is going to be endangered

then

the whole

food

chain will be in danger and

hence

our

environment

.

Therefore

this

is

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of the major environmental

issues

. On the other

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there are numerous other

issues

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consequently

harm our ecosystem.

One

among them is rising pollution.The gift of

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the industrial

revolution to our

environment

is the climbing rate of pollutants in the air, water, soil. These pollutants like chlorofluorocarbons, methane, sulphur and many more

subsequently

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rise to global warming.Another alarming reason to be considered is increased deforestation. Owing to rapid urbanization and increasing population more forest area is to be cleared in order to satisfy the basic needs of people like

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of houses and fuel etc. In conclusion, keeping in mind both the opinions aforementioned above

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my opinion, there are uncountable reasons for increasing environmental

issues

but pollution is

one

reason which is the root cause of all environmental problems from which other

issues

propagate and it is in hands of human civilization to reduce it as much as possible for a healthy living

environment

.