Overpopulation is a big problem today in many major urban centers. What are the causes, and possible solutions?
It is undeniable that many
people
have decided to move
to the centre
of the city
due to many reasons. Perhaps the best example is in the centre
of the city
have more civilized than rural areas
which make some people
make the decision to move
for opportunities in a major urban centre
. However
, moving to a major centre
area
also
causes
a problem which is overpopulation in a major urban area
, and it is crucial for the authority to tackle the problem seriously. The following paragraph will be discussing causes
and possible ways to solve them. Therefore
, the conclusion has been reached.
To begin
with, I believe that the causes
have come from many factors. Firstly
, the belief that in the centre
of the city
has more opportunities more than rural area
because many enterprises decided to stay in the centre
of the city
. Secondly
, in the centre
of the city
is easier to live in than in rural areas
. For example
, the transportation, it is easy for people
to use trains or metros instead
of using buses or some local transports. Lastly
, a larger gap in salary between a company that is
placed in a rural area
and a major centre
area
, usually companies that are placed in a major centre
area
will have a higher salary than in a rural area
.
However
, as a possible solution, I suggest that the authority should decentralize the city
. For example
, if any companies move
to a rural area
, this
company will get a discount for taxes, or make rural areas
and urban areas
equal in terms of civilization, and the last
possible solution is to decrease the cost of living in a rural area
and encourage people
to move
to the rural area
by release some policies that support this
group of people
who moved to a rural area
.
In summary, I believe that there is all of the causes
and possible ways to tackle the overpopulation in the major urban centres.Submitted by satoshi.nmtd on
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