You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: thank your friend for the holiday explain that you left your wallet in their house give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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Dear Betty, I hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you and your family for hosting me

this

holiday. It was so good to be around like-minded people. The food made by your mom was awesome , especially the mutton roast. I

also

wanted to mention that I have forgotten my wallet at your home. Did you see any black purses lying around? I

last

remember it to be lying at the side table of the guest bedroom. When I got off the taxi and tried looking for it, only

then

I realised that I'd left it at your place. Thankfully, I had my credit card with me to pay the driver. If you find it, please send it to my brother at Children's Hospital, he will bring it back along when he comes to meet us later

this

month. Once again thank you for having me over. Love, Elizabeth.

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task achievement

Try to include a bit more detail about the holiday experience to make the letter more engaging.

coherence cohesion

Consider breaking down the explanation about the wallet into shorter sentences for better readability.

task achievement

The letter addresses all parts of the task, which shows a good understanding of the prompt.

task achievement

The tone is friendly and appropriate for a letter to a friend.

coherence cohesion

The letter is generally well-structured with a clear beginning, middle, and end.

coherence cohesion

The closing statement is warm and fitting for the context.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

160 words

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