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Summarize the informations by selecting and reporting the main feautures, and make comparison where relevant

The chart provides information about the variance of residents in urban areas analyzing three years: 1950, 1950 and the expectations for 2030. The report takes account of six different areas of the world. It is easy to see that there is a steady increase in the population living in cities in all the regions represented.
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, there are still significant differences between countries.
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 the percentage in Africa doubled over the period from 1950 to 2007, and it is foreseen that the rank will double again by 2030, it remains the area with the lowest percentage of the population in the world.
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 North America will maintain its position on the podium as the region with the vast majority of citizens in urban areas.
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, it is clear that Asia presents the fastest growth of percentage, with a 25 point increase, each year, whereas Oceania has a slight increase.

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