Some people believe that government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce congestion, others think that building more and wider roads is the best way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether councils and governments are supposed to decrease road crowding by constructing train and subway
lines
or building more and wider roads
. While sufficient highways is
helpful to tackle Change the verb form
are
this
issue, I believe that having enough trains and subways are more important.
On the one hand, narrow roads
is
Change the verb form
are
main
reason for causing Add an article
the main
traffic
problems. When streets can’t provide enough space for cars, the distance between two of them are closing and it’s easily happening car crash. This
has resulted in the situation that the ratio of traffic
accidents Correct your spelling
is
in
increasing. Correct your spelling
is
For instance
, the research shows that metropolis
have higher possibilities Fix the agreement mistake
metropolises
encountering
accidents on the streets. Change preposition
of encountering
Moreover
, handling them will increase traffic
jam
. Fix the agreement mistake
jams
Thus
, constructing more and wider streets will coping
with road stress.
Wrong verb form
cope
On the other hand
, it is perhaps more important that cities have more forms of transportation chosen by citizens. Trains and subways are popular for commuters mainly because it
not only Correct pronoun usage
they
don’t
cause lots of emissions and protect Change the verb form
doesn’t
environment
Add an article
the environment
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
save time. They are always arranged properly and arrive on time, which won’t cause traffic
chaos. If cities have the tendency to build more public transport lines
, it will release road pressure. For example
, Beijing has built more than 15 subway lines
throughout whole
city. The majority Change the article
the whole
members
of society prefer Change preposition
of members
this kinds
of convenient forms rather than Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
spend
time on Wrong verb form
spending
congesting
Change the form of the verb
congested
roads
. Hence
, I believe governments can deal with jam
by expanding public transport Fix the agreement mistake
jams
lines
.
In conclusion, I can understand why people might want councils to improve roads
, but it seems to me that more train and subway lines
are more desirable in cities.Submitted by leeerh1107 on
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