Some people believe that government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce congestion, others think that building more and wider roads is the best way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether councils and governments are supposed to decrease road crowding by constructing train and subway

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or building more and wider

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. While sufficient highways

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helpful to tackle

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issue, I believe that having enough trains and subways are more important. On the one hand, narrow

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main

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reason for causing

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problems. When streets can’t provide enough space for cars, the distance between two of them are closing and it’s easily happening car crash.

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has resulted in the situation that the ratio of

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accidents

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increasing.

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, the research shows that

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have higher possibilities

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accidents on the streets.

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, handling them will increase

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.

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, constructing more and wider streets will

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with road stress.

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, it is perhaps more important that cities have more forms of transportation chosen by citizens. Trains and subways are popular for commuters mainly because

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cause lots of emissions and protect

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,

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save time. They are always arranged properly and arrive on time, which won’t cause

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chaos. If cities have the tendency to build more public transport

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, it will release road pressure.

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, Beijing has built more than 15 subway

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throughout

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city. The majority

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of society prefer

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this kinds

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of convenient forms rather than

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time on

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roads

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.

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, I believe governments can deal with

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by expanding public transport

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. In conclusion, I can understand why people might want councils to improve

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, but it seems to me that more train and subway

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are more desirable in cities.