Some people believe that government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce congestion, others think that building more and wider roads is the best way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether councils and governments are supposed to decrease road crowding by constructing train and subway
lines
or building more and wider
roads
. While sufficient highways
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helpful to tackle
this
issue, I believe that having enough trains and subways are more important. On the one hand, narrow
roads
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main
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reason for causing
traffic
problems. When streets can’t provide enough space for cars, the distance between two of them are closing and it’s easily happening car crash.
This
has resulted in the situation that the ratio of
traffic
accidents
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in
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increasing.
For instance
, the research shows that
metropolis
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have higher possibilities
encountering
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accidents on the streets.
Moreover
, handling them will increase
traffic
jam
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.
Thus
, constructing more and wider streets will
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with road stress.
On the other hand
, it is perhaps more important that cities have more forms of transportation chosen by citizens. Trains and subways are popular for commuters mainly because
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not only
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cause lots of emissions and protect
environment
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but
also
save time. They are always arranged properly and arrive on time, which won’t cause
traffic
chaos. If cities have the tendency to build more public transport
lines
, it will release road pressure.
For example
, Beijing has built more than 15 subway
lines
throughout
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city. The majority
members
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of society prefer
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of convenient forms rather than
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time on
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roads
.
Hence
, I believe governments can deal with
jam
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by expanding public transport
lines
. In conclusion, I can understand why people might want councils to improve
roads
, but it seems to me that more train and subway
lines
are more desirable in cities.
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