In the midst of
this
technology-driven global world,people don't have
time
for anything,especially cooking for themselves.Most of them think that, in
this
modern life, making
food
at
home
is just a
time
waste process,
therefore
they choose to have fast
food
from hotels,which is less
time
consuming and stressfree.I totally disagree
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this
opinion.I will state my views in
this
article with my experience.
I accept that cooking is a
time
taking process,
it is
also
a healthy as well as a good habit which
everyone
must follow.Admittedly,nowadays,people are having
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,so they can't even
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their
time
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ones,
as a result
,
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also
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into trouble.
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if they are ready to contribute thirty minutes per day of their life for cooking.Apparently,all family members must
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in
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while cooking and
everyone
must help to cook
food
and
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quality
time
with family.Which makes
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stronger.
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back.
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married young couple had filed a case for divorce, when they went for
, they came to know that both partners are working and they are not having enough
time
for communication itself.
Hence
, the court suggests
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quality
time
together by having
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jobs together for a minimum of 6 months.They listen to court and later they cancelled the divorce application together and now living happily with their
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kid.
Ostensibly,cooking
food
in our
home
is not only make us
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have a healthy relationship
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but
also
, it makes
everyone
healthy.Tacitly,homely foods are always
and which won't harm our health.But, fast foods are not like homely
food
,they may look better and taste better at the same
time
,it gives us lots of diseases.Reportedly, for the attractive look and
they add lots of chemicals in foods
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can cause cancers in humans.Especially, there is a substance called
,which most of the hotel people add on their
,which is highly cancerous and most of the
had already banned
this
substance.As I am a health worker,my
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last
year, which shows that
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those who have
on a daily basis are more prone to have not only cancer
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but
also
,obesity,cardiovascular diseases,
and so on.So, it is always best to have
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food
rather than instant
food
or
food
from outside.
To sum up,cooking at
home
in
this
busy schedule is not at all a waste of
time
, rather than, it keeps us happy and healthy .Buying
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for now, but ,after 2-3 years you have to visit
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basis and your quality of life will be compromised.