Some people believe that cooking at home is a waste of time. They feel it is better to buy fast food which is more convenient and less stressful in modern life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.

In the midst of
this
technology-driven global world,people don't have
time
for anything,especially cooking for themselves.Most of them think that, in
this
modern life, making
food
at
home
is just a
time
waste process,
therefore
they choose to have fast
food
from hotels,which is less
time
consuming and stressfree.I totally disagree
to
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this
opinion.I will state my views in
this
article with my experience. I accept that cooking is a
time
taking process,
however
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it is
also
a healthy as well as a good habit which
everyone
must follow.Admittedly,nowadays,people are having
very
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busy
schedule
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,so they can't even
spent
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their
time
with their
closed
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ones,
as a result
,
family
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the family
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relationship
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also
get
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into trouble.
Everyone
can avoid
such
scenario
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,
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if they are ready to contribute thirty minutes per day of their life for cooking.Apparently,all family members must
gathered
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in
kitchen
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the kitchen
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while cooking and
everyone
must help to cook
food
and
spent
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quality
time
with family.Which makes
family
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the family
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bond
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more
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stronger.
For instance
, there was an incident
happened
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in my town two
year
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back.
Newly
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married young couple had filed a case for divorce, when they went for
councelling
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counselling
, they came to know that both partners are working and they are not having enough
time
for communication itself.
Hence
, the court suggests
them
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to
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have
a
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quality
time
together by having
cooking
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cooked
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and doing house
chore
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jobs together for a minimum of 6 months.They listen to court and later they cancelled the divorce application together and now living happily with their
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newborn
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new born
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kid. Ostensibly,cooking
food
in our
home
is not only make us
to
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have a healthy relationship
,
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but
also
, it makes
everyone
healthy.Tacitly,homely foods are always
belivable
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believable
and which won't harm our health.But, fast foods are not like homely
food
,they may look better and taste better at the same
time
,it gives us lots of diseases.Reportedly, for the attractive look and
taste
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they add lots of chemicals in foods
which
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can cause cancers in humans.Especially, there is a substance called
aginomotto
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Ajinomoto
,which most of the hotel people add on their
recipies
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recipes
,which is highly cancerous and most of the
coutries
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countries
had already banned
this
substance.As I am a health worker,my
collegues
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colleagues
and
me
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conduct a survey
in
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last
year, which shows that
,
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those who have
fastfood
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fast food
on a daily basis are more prone to have not only cancer
,
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but
also
,obesity,cardiovascular diseases,
artherosclerosis
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atherosclerosis
and so on.So, it is always best to have
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homemade
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home made
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homemade
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food
rather than instant
food
or
food
from outside. To sum up,cooking at
home
in
this
busy schedule is not at all a waste of
time
, rather than, it keeps us happy and healthy .Buying
fastfood
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fast food
is convenient and
stressfree
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stress-free
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for now, but ,after 2-3 years you have to visit
hospital
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for
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daily
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a daily
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basis and your quality of life will be compromised.
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