Some people believe that cooking at home is a waste of time. They feel it is better to buy fast food which is more convenient and less stressful in modern life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.

In the midst of

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technology-driven global world,people don't have

time

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for anything,especially cooking for themselves.Most of them think that, in

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modern life, making

food

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at

home

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is just a

time

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waste process,

therefore

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they choose to have fast

food

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from hotels,which is less

time

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consuming and stressfree.I totally disagree

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this

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opinion.I will state my views in

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article with my experience. I accept that cooking is a

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taking process,

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however

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it is

also

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a healthy as well as a good habit which

everyone

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must follow.Admittedly,nowadays,people are having

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busy

schedule

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,so they can't even

spent

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their

time

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with their

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ones,

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,

family

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the family

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relationship

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also

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get

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into trouble.

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can avoid

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scenario

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,

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if they are ready to contribute thirty minutes per day of their life for cooking.Apparently,all family members must

gathered

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in

kitchen

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the kitchen

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while cooking and

everyone

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must help to cook

food

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and

spent

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quality

time

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with family.Which makes

family

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the family

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bond

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more

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stronger.

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, there was an incident

happened

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in my town two

year

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back.

Newly

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married young couple had filed a case for divorce, when they went for

councelling

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counselling

, they came to know that both partners are working and they are not having enough

time

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for communication itself.

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, the court suggests

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to

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have

a

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apply

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quality

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together by having

cooking

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cooked

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and doing house

chore

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jobs together for a minimum of 6 months.They listen to court and later they cancelled the divorce application together and now living happily with their

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new born

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kid. Ostensibly,cooking

food

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in our

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is not only make us

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have a healthy relationship

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but

also

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, it makes

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healthy.Tacitly,homely foods are always

belivable

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believable

and which won't harm our health.But, fast foods are not like homely

food

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,they may look better and taste better at the same

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,it gives us lots of diseases.Reportedly, for the attractive look and

taste

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they add lots of chemicals in foods

which

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can cause cancers in humans.Especially, there is a substance called

aginomotto

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Ajinomoto

,which most of the hotel people add on their

recipies

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recipes

,which is highly cancerous and most of the

coutries

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countries

had already banned

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substance.As I am a health worker,my

collegues

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colleagues

and

me

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conduct a survey

in

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apply

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last

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year, which shows that

,

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those who have

fastfood

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fast food

on a daily basis are more prone to have not only cancer

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but

also

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,obesity,cardiovascular diseases,

artherosclerosis

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atherosclerosis

and so on.So, it is always best to have

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homemade

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home made

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homemade

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food

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rather than instant

food

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or

food

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from outside. To sum up,cooking at

home

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in

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busy schedule is not at all a waste of

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, rather than, it keeps us happy and healthy .Buying

fastfood

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fast food

is convenient and

stressfree

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for now, but ,after 2-3 years you have to visit

hospital

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for

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daily

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basis and your quality of life will be compromised.