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Some people say that instead of seeing the internet as a way of opening up new possibilities worldwide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Over the
last
 two or three decades, technology has been developing tremendously due to people's
demand
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 are
also
 increased day-by-day. some think that
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using the
internet
 as a form of creating up unique chances to around the world
instead
 of should be focused on
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 interaction effect. I strongly agree with
this
 statement for the following reasons.
To begin
 with, there are more effects of having on social communication and we should be given more attention on
this
.
Firstly
,
this
 can be reduced the physical interaction between close
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circles
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 even within a family due to most prefers to talk by social media,
thus
, the families bonding could be stopped.
For instance
, a
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recent
 report by
Times
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 of India said that more than 70% of
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adults do not like to spend
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quality
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time with their family members
in contrast
 they prefer to use
more
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internet
. These are the effects
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 social interaction
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internet
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.
Secondly
, some
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a
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terrible habit
such
 as addiction
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to
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 using
internet
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 for various reasons, they
canoot
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can't
cannot
 live without
internet
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the internet
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 in
this
 modern era because they use to practice.
For instance
,in Indian people are always used
internet
connection
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connections
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 for
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personal and professional reasons in order to they will be lost many things especially
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happiness.
In addition
, social communication brings more stress and
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depression
 in order to the population will be suffered tremendously. To conclude,
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internet
 gives a plethora
amenities
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of amenities
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 for humans, the public gets more from
this
. Addiction and losing the families bonding
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 the effects of having on social communication so we should be
foused
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focused
 on
this
.
Therefore
, I strongly agree with
this
 statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope the public is using
internet
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 correct way and minimum amount of time.
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