It is often said “when in Rome, do as the Romans do”. Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they visit? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?

Some people believe that learning a
language
will help in understanding the
culture
of a particular country.
However
, I believe there are two sides to
this
coin, which need to be addressed. The
first
side is that not all traditions and cultures are
language
-based. It comes down to the individual interest, if they want to learn they will learn. So no guarantee learning a
language
will give you a better understanding of a particular
culture
.
For instance
, many foreigners have a better understanding of Hindu mythology as compared to Indians, even though it is
this
very mythology
that is
part of our
culture
.
This
is mainly because there are many computer and mobile applications that can translate any
language
with the click of a button, thereby allowing a person to get familiar with a particular
culture
in their native
language
. The other side of the coin to be considered is the human element of it. If you know the local
language
, it is much easier to engage fellow locals and begin to understand the
culture
and traditions from their point of you and not only that, you would be able to join them as they partake in the traditions. Reading material content on tradition is one thing, but living and embracing it is another, which I feel can only be done by learning the
language
of the country. To sum it all up, I think it is naive to say that you can learn about a
culture
or tradition without knowing about the
language
because the “human component” always plays an important role. As always, only if something is interesting will one have the motivation to learn it.
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