Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum overweight the disadvantages??

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debateable
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debatable
whether
museums
charge for admission or others
are
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free for it. Despite charging for entry
fees
has
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some drawbacks, I think that the advantages do overweight the disadvantages. One of the drawbacks of charging for entering
to
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museums
is that it is like
limitation
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for some persons especially for students who are unable to afford the
fees
although
they would try to visit it.
For example
, as for some students who need to make
money
for their education and they are unable to spend their
money
for other expenditures like going to the cinema or museum.
Therefore
, entry
fees
should be free for students like
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the library
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so that they can access to get into the museum whenever they want to visit.
However
, there are some benefits for
museums
by asking
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payment for admissions.
Firstly
, one of the benefits is that it can
improved
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by demanding
fees
from visitors.
For instance
, there should be enough
money
to improve
museums
like upgrading it or adding some
others
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items
otherwise
it will not be prolonged.
Secondly
, it can be beneficial for
well-maintenance
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of the
museums
. If everyone can access free
to
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museums
, there will not be
budget
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a budget
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to allocate for
improvement
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the improvement
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and maintenance of the
museums
and it will be worthless for people since they are able to get access free of charge. To sum up, demanding
money
for entering
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museums
as admissions
fees
has some negative effects
nevertheless
, I do believe that there are many positive effects and the advantages do overweight than disadvantages.
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