Some people today prefer to get advice for medical problems and do not want to visit a doctor. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?
Some people tend to consult about their medical issues in
drugstore
Correct article usage
a drugstore
instead
of visiting a doctor. However
preparing drugs without consultation with a doctor may has
some consequences, it decreases lots of expenses. In my Change the verb form
have
opinion
both Add a comma
,opinion
of
developments have their advantages and disadvantages which will Change preposition
apply
illustrated
in Change the verb form
be illustrated
illustrate
this
essay.
In some countries
self-treatment is Add a comma
,countries
such
popular that people visit doctors only in urgent and critical positions. One of the benefits of self-treatment is time saving
. Add a hyphen
time-saving
For instance
, instead
of waiting in clinics and doctors’ offices several hours to be visited, you can buy the drugs you need in a drugstores
directly. Correct the article-noun agreement
drugstores
a drugstore
In addition
, in some areas
there are plenty of herbal drugs which can help you to overcome your illness and in most cases they are effective. These days treatments fee is high significantly; Add a comma
,areas
therefore
, it does not worth to visit
a doctor for simple problems like Change the verb form
visiting
headache
, Fix the agreement mistake
headaches
stomachache
, Fix the agreement mistake
stomachaches
cold
and so on.
Fix the agreement mistake
colds
Although
not visiting doctors can reduce expenses and save time, there are some aftereffects which sometimes are very perilous. Firstly
, some medicines
have several side effects and people should be aware about
them before consumption. To illustrate, there are a bunch of Change the preposition
of
medicines
which
take consumers to sleep and if someone Correct pronoun usage
that
take
Change the verb form
takes
this
Correct determiner usage
these
medicines
while driving and do not know about its
side effects, it may Correct pronoun usage
their
causes
a horrible car accident. Change the verb form
cause
Secondly
, wrong
detection causes unsuitable Change the article
the wrong
medicines
consumption which may result in serious problems and death occasionally.
To conclude, generally if somebody buy
a medicine for a simple problem base on the knowledge which they have about their body may be effective, they should be aware Change the verb form
buys
about
its marginal effects and Change the preposition
of
dangerous
of unsuitable drug usage though. From my point of Replace the word
dangers
view
self-treatment is a positive development if it Add a comma
,view
be
done logically.Change the verb form
is
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