Some people today prefer to get advice for medical problems and do not want to visit a doctor. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Some people tend to consult about their medical issues in
drugstore
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a drugstore
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instead
of visiting a doctor.
However
preparing drugs without consultation with a doctor may
has
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have
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some consequences, it decreases lots of expenses. In my
opinion
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both
of
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apply
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developments have their advantages and disadvantages which will
illustrated
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illustrate
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in
this
essay. In some
countries
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self-treatment is
such
popular that people visit doctors only in urgent and critical positions. One of the benefits of self-treatment is
time saving
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time-saving
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.
For instance
,
instead
of waiting in clinics and doctors’ offices several hours to be visited, you can buy the drugs you need in
a drugstores
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drugstores
a drugstore
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directly.
In addition
, in some
areas
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there are plenty of herbal drugs which can help you to overcome your illness and in most cases they are effective. These days treatments fee is high significantly;
therefore
, it does not worth
to visit
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visiting
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a doctor for simple problems like
headache
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headaches
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,
stomachache
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stomachaches
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,
cold
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colds
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and so on.
Although
not visiting doctors can reduce expenses and save time, there are some aftereffects which sometimes are very perilous.
Firstly
, some
medicines
have several side effects and people should be aware
about
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them before consumption. To illustrate, there are a bunch of
medicines
which
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that
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take consumers to sleep and if someone
take
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this
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these
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medicines
while driving and do not know about
its
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their
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side effects, it may
causes
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cause
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a horrible car accident.
Secondly
,
wrong
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the wrong
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detection causes unsuitable
medicines
consumption which may result in serious problems and death occasionally. To conclude, generally if somebody
buy
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a medicine for a simple problem base on the knowledge which they have about their body may be effective, they should be aware
about
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of
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its marginal effects and
dangerous
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dangers
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of unsuitable drug usage though. From my point of
view
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self-treatment is a positive development if it
be
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is
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done logically.
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