Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The fact that losing certain species of
plants
and animals
is the main problem of the environment during our time is acceptable whereas others point to many other crucial environmental problems. I am going to discuss both sides and state interpretations.
Firstly
, the technology and the living standard are getting higher and higher, people
cut down trees and replace them with modern buildings.There are also
people
who are logging and poaching illegally for money. These lead to deforestation and habitat loss for particular animals
. Protecting plants
and animals
are very pivotal because our food chain is mostly helped by them. In Asia, people
eat rice which is from the plants
and to grow those rice plants
, animals
such
as cows and chickens are used. Flora and fauna also
provide us tranquil environment since the plants
can change the climate and also
animals
help in work that cannot be done by humans. By conserving those species, the ozone layer is repaired and they also
protect the world from global warming which threatens the human race these days so, it is very critical to preserve those species.
On the other hand
, others say that there are many significant problems affecting the environment. Water
pollutions, air
pollutions and Covid-19 are others also
pivotal, too. The factories and cars emit pollutant particles and the air
is contaminated and run-off water
is also
tainted as well as the water
cycle. If the water
and air
are not clean, people
health can be harmed and this
can also
bring catastrophe. The end of the world may get closer and closer if the dangerous gases are emitted continuously by many factories. To illustrate clearly, the recent spreading virus, Covid-19 is also
important. Many people
are suffering physically and mentally from it. Many countries have reduced the Covid patients but this
pandemic has not stopped completely and harmed people
and their businesses one way or another. It is also
critical to protect people
from those viruses.
To conclude, losing flora and fauna are the most important environmental problem but there are many problems such
as air
pollution, water
pollution and the viruses which we are facing. In my opinion, people
should protect all those fields not to get exacerbated.Submitted by kyarnyo512 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite