Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The fact that losing certain species of
plants
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animals
is the main problem of the environment during our time is acceptable whereas others point to many other crucial environmental problems. I am going to discuss both sides and state interpretations.
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, the technology and the living standard are getting higher and higher, Linking Words
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cut down trees and replace them with modern buildings.There are Use synonyms
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who are logging and poaching illegally for money. These lead to deforestation and habitat loss for particular Use synonyms
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. Protecting Use synonyms
plants
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are very pivotal because our food chain is mostly helped by them. In Asia, Use synonyms
people
eat rice which is from the Use synonyms
plants
and to grow those rice Use synonyms
plants
, Use synonyms
animals
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as cows and chickens are used. Flora and fauna Linking Words
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provide us tranquil environment since the Linking Words
plants
can change the climate and Use synonyms
also
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animals
help in work that cannot be done by humans. By conserving those species, the ozone layer is repaired and they Use synonyms
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protect the world from global warming which threatens the human race these days so, it is very critical to preserve those species.
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On the other hand
, others say that there are many significant problems affecting the environment. Linking Words
Water
pollutions, Use synonyms
air
pollutions and Covid-19 are others Use synonyms
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pivotal, too. The factories and cars emit pollutant particles and the Linking Words
air
is contaminated and run-off Use synonyms
water
is Use synonyms
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tainted as well as the Linking Words
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cycle. If the Use synonyms
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are not clean, Use synonyms
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health can be harmed and Use synonyms
this
can Linking Words
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bring catastrophe. The end of the world may get closer and closer if the dangerous gases are emitted continuously by many factories. To illustrate clearly, the recent spreading virus, Covid-19 is Linking Words
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important. Many Linking Words
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are suffering physically and mentally from it. Many countries have reduced the Covid patients but Use synonyms
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pandemic has not stopped completely and harmed Linking Words
people
and their businesses one way or another. It is Use synonyms
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critical to protect Linking Words
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from those viruses.
To conclude, losing flora and fauna are the most important environmental problem but there are many problems Use synonyms
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pollution, Use synonyms
water
pollution and the viruses which we are facing. In my opinion, Use synonyms
people
should protect all those fields not to get exacerbated.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite