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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter, • explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work Write at least 150 words.

#museum #home #people #work #director #skills #qualities
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding
to
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an advertisement published in the National
Museum
 Library. I am interested in applying for a part-time volunteer at the
museum
. It would be great if you could consider my application and CV. I, Jenny Won, am currently studying
Master
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 of Art at Thammasat University. Learning about art and history is my passion, so I would like to have a chance to
work
 at the
museum
, which has a long history of Thailand.
Moreover
, I have just enrolled
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course
required
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 me to do unpaid
work
 for communities.
Thus
, working at National
Museum
 Library would
be give
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 me a credit
to
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 the course. I believe that I have all
necessary
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 valuable qualities to do
this
work
, including
knowledgeable
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 about Thai’s history,
reliable
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, and
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being friendly
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friendly
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. Generally, I will be available on weekend.
However
, during the winter break, I could
work
 on
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weekday
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 as well. Please let me know if you need
further
 detail. I would be pleased to send you more information. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Jenny Won
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Volunteer
  • Part-time
  • Unpaid work
  • Museum director
  • Skills and qualities
  • Customer service
  • Organization
  • Team player
  • Flexible
  • Reliable
  • Positive attitude
  • Availability
  • Professional goals
  • Community contribution
  • References
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