Large companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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in occasional

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events

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have disadvantaged impacts on

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. From my perspective, while

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argument can be explained for some reasons, I very disagree with

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statement because big

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will bring a lot of benefits for economics and organization as well as members belonging to national teams. It is understandable that why some people subscribe to the view that commercials in

sports

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events

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are not relevant for watchers, especially youngsters, who are part of audiences of almost

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sport

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events

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is because several manufacturers’

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are not good for health

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as

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tobacco, wine.

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can lead to unpredictable consequences, which easily attracted the young generation to form an unhealthy lifestyle or less-minded actions when they use it.

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, I find

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argument somewhat compelling points since mass big corporations advertising in

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tournaments can help them increase the numbers of both potential domestic and international customers to

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their

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,

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is largely contributes

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to the economic growth of the nation. Another significant advantage is that allowing big

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to participate in

sports

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events

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can split the cost of organizations or transmit motivation to

players

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. If one tournament has some good

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or gets a championship league, large corporations will express supports through several

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or money, which

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donate for impressive or good

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in order to pay for preparations of the

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tournaments or practice and equipment

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.

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, it is seemly like a means of transport bringing footballers that become more closer with the public and they play a role model in the young generation, especially fashion, lifestyle and some positive messages. In the

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that big

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use player’s images to put into commercials or invite celebrity

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to take part in their product TV show. In conclusion, there are several advantages from big corporations attending

sports

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events

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to advertise their

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is that increasing economic growth and sharing the

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of tournaments as well as contributing some supports as sport’s image and gift for

national

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the national

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team.