Large companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people are of the opinion that advertising
products
in occasional sports
events
have disadvantaged impacts on sports
. From my perspective, while this
argument can be explained for some reasons, I very disagree with this
statement because big companies
will bring a lot of benefits for economics and organization as well as members belonging to national teams.
It is understandable that why some people subscribe to the view that commercials in sports
events
are not relevant for watchers, especially youngsters, who are part of audiences of almost Correct quantifier usage
all sport
sport
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sports
events
. This
is because several manufacturers’ products
are not good for health such
as:
tobacco, wine. Remove the comma
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This
can lead to unpredictable consequences, which easily attracted the young generation to form an unhealthy lifestyle or less-minded actions when they use it. However
, I find this
argument somewhat compelling points since mass big corporations advertising in sports
tournaments can help them increase the numbers of both potential domestic and international customers to coming
their Add the preposition
tocoming
products
, this
is largely contributes
to the economic growth of the nation.
Another significant advantage is that allowing big Change the verb form
is largely contributing
companies
to participate in sports
events
can split the cost of organizations or transmit motivation to players
. If one tournament has some good players
or gets a championship league, large corporations will express supports through several gift
or money, which Fix the agreement mistake
gifts
companies
donate for impressive or good players
in order to pay for preparations of the next
tournaments or practice and equipment cost
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costs
Furthermore
, it is seemly like a means of transport bringing footballers that become more closer with the public and they play a role model in the young generation, especially fashion, lifestyle and some positive messages. In the way
that big Add a comma
,way
companies
use player’s images to put into commercials or invite celebrity players
to take part in their product TV show.
In conclusion, there are several advantages from big corporations attending sports
events
to advertise their products
is that increasing economic growth and sharing the costly
of tournaments as well as contributing some supports as sport’s image and gift for Replace the word
cost
national
team.Add an article
the national
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite