Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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, economic advancements have been used as a yardstick to define a
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progress
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. For
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reason, many authorities consider enhancing
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economic
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as their topmost priority.
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, some people have a different attitude, where they consider other forms of
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as education of the public, social harmony and healthcare are just as important. Two sides of
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argument will be thoroughly analysed before drawing a reasoned conclusion. On the one hand, when the economic
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of a
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is focused upon, it is ensured that
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there are more job opportunities, more business ventures being undertaken, more technology being utilized and adequate collection of funds being collected as taxes.
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leads to a reduction in poverty and improvement in
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of living and buying capacity of the population.
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, a
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with higher revenue can invest in
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strengthening its public
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as transport facilities and health care systems.
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way, it will hold a greater stance on a global stage in terms of its political influence and trading power.
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, there are several other factors that equally determine the
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of a
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. Some of which include integrity of the existing legislative system, rights of
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women and minorities, social justice, human rights,equality and environmental
sustainablity
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sustainability
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. Perhaps a key consideration while measuring a countries
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is how well they are striving towards achieving alternative forms of fuels to sustain industrial
growth
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. Alternatively, the
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of a nation can
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be measures
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in terms of the mental well being of the population.
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, because China imposes various restrictions on the public, in terms of voting rights and internet consumption,there is a direct impact on the happiness quotient of its residents.
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it is clear that
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factors other than monetary aspects are of equal footage when evaluating its
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. To summarise, the two sides of the argument concerning the
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of the
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have strong
supportiong
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supporting
views. In my view
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however
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agree with those who believe that other measures of
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are just as important as economic
growth
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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