Some think that a country's success is completely dependent on economic progress. While others believe that other factors are also important. What are the different factors contributing to the success of a country? Do you believe that one factor is more important than other.

The
progress
of any organization depends greatly on its value system, same with any government.
Therefore
, for any
Nation
to succeed they must put in place some
value based
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factors
. Personally, while I do not think that any factor is more important than the other, I am of the opinion that every factor is important to make a country great.
Although
economic prosperity is important in showing the success of a
nation
, other
factors
like social
progress
and rule of law are very important. The social
progress
index shows how well a
Nation
is serving its population.
For instance
, many
of
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the
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economically rich countries like the United Kingdom and
United
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States have shown poor social
progress
due to the high rate of unemployment and expensive cost of living and housing. As
such
what is the use of wealth on paper that does not serve the people?
On the other hand
, I believe that all
factors
are important as they all contribute to the growth of a society.
For example
, Venezuela was rich and promising among its neighbouring countries, when the rule of law became disrespected, research showed that their economy began to decline mainly due to lawlessness. To
this
end, to maintain a peaceful, orderly and prosperous
nation
all
factors
need to be in check. To conclude, I believe that for a
nation
to be truly great, it has to check all important boxes, especially the one that concerns the people.
Hence
, I think that economic
progress
may not be enough as no factor should outshine the other.
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