Nowadays, some parents put a lot of pressure on their children. Why is the reason for doing that? Is this a positive or negative development for the children?

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ever-changing world, too much is expected from

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than in past generations. Obviously, many

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are responsible for the heavy

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their

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are under.

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on the young

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but some negative effects of

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of all, in

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a society with fierce competition, the young are faced with

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unstable prospects. Considering the fact, quite a number of

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believe that

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must have excellent academic performance unless they want to be stuck in a low paying service job. In

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cases, the young are motivated to work hard to meet their

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' demands. Another important reason causing burnout is

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' high expectations. It is common for

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to expect that their sons and daughters can outperform their peers, and they often sign their

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up for after-school classes--sports, piano and dance, reducing their time for recreation. The negative impacts of heavy

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on

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can not be neglected.

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with, in order to get exam results right, some

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spend too much time on study, so they are more vulnerable to health problems,

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as short-sightedness and obesity.

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, over-scheduled

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often feel exhausted when having to attend extra classes after a tiring day at school,

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, they are more likely to be overwhelmed by physiological and psychological stress. From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that

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are under too much parental

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for several reasons, and it is evident that stress from

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has a variety of drawbacks.

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problem should be taken seriously by both

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and

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to prevent it from deteriorating

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