Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, there is considerable debate on ever-increasing

crimes

in

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society

. In

this

regard, some people assert that capital punishment is the answer to curb the

increase

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of

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rate

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of

crimes

and improve security.

However

, I disagree with

this

statement because alternate punishments and

counseling

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seems

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to be better options.

Firstly

,

severity

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the severity

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of

crime

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shall be considered before concluding the punishment. Can we hang a person if he or she has committed a petty

crime

? No,

this

is not justifiable.

Hence

, to decrease the

violence

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example

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this

, where it was printed about a survey which alleged that 95

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of prisoners after spending 2 years in jail are willing to live a civilized life

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if released.

Therefore

, to restrain the

violence

in the

society

, imprisonment of

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period tends to be a better option than hanging the offender till death.

Secondly

,

counseling

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the criminal may change the

criminals

which

further

could lead to

alter

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the rate of

crimes

in

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society

. Listening to

criminals

and showing empathy towards them could be one of

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to minimize the

violence

being spread in

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society

. Through

this

, root causes of

crimes

may be found and necessary action could be initiated so that these

crimes

shall not happen in future leading to

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and

crime

-free environment.

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,

Last

year, a rehabilitation program was started by local police of Delhi where 4 sessions

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held by

crime

experts with

criminals

and it was found that in most

of

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cases

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crime

was committed by law-breakers to prevent their family from

hunger-death

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.

Hence

,

counseling

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the law-offenders is

suitable

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a suitable

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way to change them and

the

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society

's safety

concern

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. To conclude, it can be reiterated that there are more effective ways to treat

criminals

and make

society

a better place to live.

Hence

, capital punishment is not a concrete solution to end

violence

in

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society

.