You have recently taken a two-day course. Write to the course organiser to give your feedback. In your letter: give details of the course say what you liked or disliked about it suggest some improvements to the course.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to give you an evaluation of the TEFL
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I took at Exeter College
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weekend.
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there were 10 hours of classes each day, I did not find the days as exhausting as I had feared because there was a good mix of theory and practical sessions. The different styles of teaching from the various tutors
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helped to keep everyone engaged and motivated. I particularly enjoyed the group work as I learnt a lot from the other students and had fun doing the activities with them. Changing the groups around each time so that we worked with different people was a great idea. There were
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excellent handouts from all the sessions. My only criticism of the
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is the lack of time given for the individual teaching practices we had to do each day. I do understand that with 20 people on the
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, they did take up a lot of time, but 2 minutes per presentation was not long enough to practice all we had learnt. Addressing
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issue would make an excellent
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even better. Yours faithfully, Jacky Spear

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Consider providing a brief overview of what the course covered in terms of topic areas or skills taught.
coherence and cohesion
Try to ensure each paragraph has a clear focus, focusing only on one aspect per paragraph to enhance clarity.
coherence and cohesion
The structure of the letter is well-organized with clear paragraphs for each point of feedback.
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The tone is appropriately formal and polite for a letter of feedback, enhancing the effectiveness of your message.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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