Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is a common belief that human activities harmed the
earth
whereas others believe that it makes
earth
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a better place to live. I personally believe that human activities have the most negative effects on the
earth
such
as climate change and resource depletion.
This
essay will discuss my viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with,
firstly
there is a common air and
water
pollution. Due to new technology, everybody has their own private vehicles which are affordable. So, vehicles emit carbon dioxide which is really dangerous for our environment. Due to the excessive carbon dioxide temperature of the
earth
is increasing day by day. As result, glaciers are melting and the temperature is rising.
For instance
, the India express newspaper published an article regarding environmental pollution. For the
last
few decades temperature is rising continually which has really affected climate. In the
second
place, nowadays the population is increasing rapidly. It is a significant reason for resources depletion. People are wasting natural resources
such
as
water
.
Moreover
, many industries throw their wastage in the sea or rivers.
Hence
, it polluted
water
. Another reason is
deforestation
people are cutting trees to make luxurious homes. Due to
deforestation
, the weather gets disturbed and some species get extinct. According to the Newyork times, 80% of the panda species get extinct due to
deforestation
. To sum up, I think that human activities have negative effects on the environment
such
as
deforestation
, air and
water
pollution. Some natural resources are at the end of extinction.
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