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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Using mobile
phones
 in school should be prohibited or not? Some people think that
children
 should not use their
phones
 when they are studying, while some people think that
children
 could use their
phones
. I believe that
phones
 should not be allowed to use during class, it might cause the
children
 to lose focus on their studies and
also
 make the
children
 in the same classroom lose concentrate too. There are some reasons why
phones
 should be banned during school time. If the
children
 used their
phones
, they will not concentrate on their teacher or the topic that they are studying.
Moreover
, when they are done with their business on their
phones
, they will find out that they could not catch up with the topic since the teacher may move on to other topics and that causes them to ask their classmate many questions later.
However
, there are
also
 some benefits when the
children
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 their
phones
 in class. Not only can they look up some information
that is
 not written in the book, but they can
also
 find some answers or methods to solve some questions they could not understand. Many students are too shy to raise their hands and ask teachers questions, so using their
phones
 might be the most suitable way for them. Whether the
phones
 should be used in school time or not. In my point of view,
phones
 should be prohibited when they are studying as it will make them stop paying attention to class.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distraction
  • Cyberbullying
  • Concentration
  • Emergency communication
  • Digital literacy
  • Educational resources
  • Social development
  • Self-regulation
  • Enforcement
  • Socioeconomic status
  • Technology access
  • Learning apps
  • Screen time
  • Peer interaction
  • School policy
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