Some people say that the main environment on problem for our time is to loss of particulare species of plans an animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
A group of people maintain that
lossing
a different sort of Correct your spelling
losing
animals
or plants is the main issues
in the environment that we are living in. While, some other of them believe that Fix the agreement mistake
issue
another
issues, Correct quantifier usage
other
such
as,
air pollution are more important than Remove the comma
apply
lossing
Correct your spelling
losing
animals
. From my point of view, although
there are too many important environmental problems, extinction of animals
or some special types of plants is the main one.
To begin
with, animal and plant's generation
will be disappeared in the soon future.Whenever and wherever a type of animal disappears because of Fix the agreement mistake
generations
the
illness or hunting, it's the beginning of losing another sort of them. Correct article usage
apply
This
circle will go on because they lose their food source and after a long time, when all of the animals
died
out, human's food will decrease until we have Nothing to eat and survive. So we might start hunting others Wrong verb form
die
to
we could just stay alive. Correct your spelling
so
As a result
, earth
would be disappeared. Add an article
the earth
For example
, in Iran
after the Add a comma
,Iran
last
Iranian cheetah had died out, the number of snakes which
feed and Correct pronoun usage
that
then
decrease and it might fall either.
Air pollution is an
another type of natural Remove the article
apply
issues
. It has too many harmful effects not only on Fix the agreement mistake
issue
humans
lifeReplace the word
human
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
on the Ozon layer which is going to produce some other difficalties
on global warming. Correct your spelling
difficulties
Firstly
, it injures human
body and health. it's the main reason Correct article usage
the human
of
skin cancer which might be really common and hurts too many people. Another reason is thatChange preposition
for
,
it would Remove the comma
apply
harms
the health of Change the verb form
harm
heart
, Correct article usage
the heart
such
as,
springing heart attack. Remove the comma
apply
Secondly
, its
Replace the word
it's
it is
torn
the Ozon layer which is protecting us from the dangerous ray of the sun. So, if it completely breaks, our life would be as difficult as possible.
In conclusion, most of the other problems would be solved by Wrong verb form
tore
government
or even people but there would be no way for keeping all sorts of Correct article usage
the government
animals
or plants alive.Submitted by roshaniomolbanin on
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