In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent years,there is an opinion that there will be no printed newspapers or
books
in the near future, and it's most widely
believe
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that almost 95% of
population
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prefer to read them online rather than printed ones.To certain points,I would agree with
this
statement.The particular reason for
this
circumstance
are
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environmental crisis and economical issues. As far as environmental crisis
concerned
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, reading online is a better way for both
human
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and
environment
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.To cue evidence, between 3.5 to 7 billion trees are being cut down every year according to a report published by the Rainforest Action Network and
obviously
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this
number is tremendously huge, but we can decrease it easily by some simple performances and schedules.To draw a conclusion,we can somehow save our planet by transforming printed
books
to
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online ones and
intercept
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a series of deforestation. From
economical
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an economical
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point of view, online
books
have more benefits for students and even society.
For instance
, students should buy academic
books
overprice and it's literally tough for some international students.So if professors share them online they could help them a lot.
Moreover
,writers make money from
this
way.So in my opinion, governments should pay their salaries and share those
books
free or
in
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low prices. To sum up, everything that has been stated so far, online
books
and everything which
is relate
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to
this
topic can help and even improve humanity.Clearly,in the foreseeable future,every printed
contents
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will be online.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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