When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centres for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is very important to allot more land for
parks
and public Use synonyms
sports
clubs than malls during Use synonyms
setup
of Correct article usage
the setup
new
town or sector. It helps Correct article usage
a new
people
to spend Use synonyms
their
quality Correct pronoun usage
apply
time
with their family and friends every day. I fully agree with the statement. Use synonyms
This
essay will elaborate Linking Words
my
perspective in detail.
Every new town and sector should have more space for public Change preposition
on my
parks
and Use synonyms
sports
facilities because it enhances the social life of the residents of the area. Children get enough space to play games Use synonyms
such
as cricket and football if municipalities have already allocated the areas to grounds. Linking Words
Moreover
, it Linking Words
also
helps women and elderly Linking Words
people
to do exercise and gossip in the evening at Use synonyms
parks
. Use synonyms
Last
but not least, it improves the overall health of Linking Words
masses
by spending Correct article usage
the masses
time
in outdoor activities. Use synonyms
For example
, according to World Health Organisation, it has Linking Words
seen
that the residents who have facilities of Add a missing verb
been seen
parks
and Use synonyms
sports
are more physically and mentally fit as compared to the Use synonyms
people
who do not have Use synonyms
such
facilities.
The Shopping centres are good to buy things or get some technological entertainment as Cinema, Restaurants but Linking Words
Linking Words
this
closed corner buildings do not let Change the determiner
these
people
go towards fitness. Use synonyms
Secondly
, these places are not free of charge, it takes to get their service which Linking Words
make
Change the verb form
makes
economic
burden on Add an article
the economic
an economic
people
, Use synonyms
although
Linking Words
public funded
Add a hyphen
public-funded
parks
let them spend their leisure Use synonyms
time
without any cost. Use synonyms
Thirdly
, Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
has
to dress up to go to shopping centres to get some enjoyment which is difficult to do after hectic schedules of Change the verb form
have
people
. So, in Use synonyms
this
scenario, they love to go to Linking Words
parks
in their trousers to feel the beauty of nature to reduce Use synonyms
the
stress level. Change the word
their
For instance
, as per the survey of The Hindu newspaper, Linking Words
people
who indulge in some sort of Use synonyms
sports
has 50%less chance to get depression.
In Conclusion, Use synonyms
the
open areas like grounds and Correct article usage
apply
parks
are much more beneficial and effective to spend Use synonyms
the
free Change the word
their
time
Use synonyms
for
Change preposition
with
people
rather than Use synonyms
go
to shopping places. So, responsible authorities should always give more spaces to Wrong verb form
going
parks
and Use synonyms
sports
Use synonyms
club
during Fix the agreement mistake
clubs
new
construction of towns to enhance the overall fitness of Correct article usage
the new
people
.Use synonyms
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