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Many social media accounts are fake. What problem does this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

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The number of social
media
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 platforms is increasing day by day,nowadays. That gave a rise to excessive amounts of fake
accounts
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 on social networks. In
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 I will explain why it is a problem and outline possible tackle of it . Fake
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 on social
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 have a drawback as propagandizing moral principles. Those
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 most of the time promote child and domestic abuse violence and terrorism by posting pictures and reporting posts on the pages.
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, the more fake
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 are created, the more quantity of population is influenced by them
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, there can be a solution as requiring an ID while registering on social
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 . An individual must provide either a passport or drivers license in order to create an account, so once a person registers she or he will be not able to create another account since
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, one person will have only one account and it will reduce the percentage of fake
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 on the Net The development of social platforms brings the problem as the growth of not real
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 which have bad influences on social
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 users. The potential tackle is providing ID while a person signs up on the platform.
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