Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is said that human

lives

will have beneficial impacts because of the growth of artificial

intelligence

area in the years to come. I agree with

this

assertion that applying artificial

intelligence

brings more positive effects than negative effects on the

lives

of

the

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human being. There is a variety of negative impacts when artificial

intelligence

develop

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.

Firstly

, Artificial

intelligence

will make an increase in unemployment in the near future.

This

is particularly the case for manual workers who will be replaced by AI robots because robots can do manual jobs precisely in a short –time

such

as delivery men or cashiers in supermarkets.

Secondly

, people can be leaked private information because of using smart devices which base on artificial

intelligence

.

This

is because users have to sign up for their real information to use some platforms, and

this

leads to that hackers and cybercriminals could steal users’ personal information through the internet or smartphones.

For example

, according to a survey by Café F, 30% of Facebook users in 2019 admitted that they were stolen accounts and had to pay money for hackers to take back their accounts.

However

, in my view, the development of the artificial

intelligence

field will have greater positive impacts on people’s

lives

. Primarily,

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artificial

intelligent

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will help boost productivity in companies. In fact, worker offices can save much time to solve paperwork

such

as managing

working

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schedule

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and analyzing the data precisely by using applications or software.

Moreover

, human

lives

will become more convenient and smarter with the Internet things which

based

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on artificial

intelligence

technology.

For instance

, with smart home systems, people can turn on or turn off the light by voice or through their smartphones, and

this

system even sends alarms from homes to owners’ positions and calls automatically the polices when burglars break into their house. In conclusion,

although

the growth of artificial

intelligence

has some negative impact on human

lives

, I believed that the artificial

intelligence

field brings more good effects on people’s

lives

such

as working and quality of living.