The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter • describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • suggest what should be. done about the problem

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Dear Mr Smith, My name is Jimena, I live in Tugun, and I am writing to you in regard to the garbage collection system

that is

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not working well at all. My neighbour and I are very disappointed with

this

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situation, as we have been living here for many years and

this

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is the first time that we have experienced problems with the

rubbish

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collection. For some reason, the

rubbish

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collector is coming every two weeks

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of every week, he is

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not collecting the

rubbish

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from every bin, leaving some of them that are on the street positioned in the right place to be collected.

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, having an excess amount of

rubbish

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in every house is causing rats invasion. We do not know how to handle

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problem. So please, now that you are aware of

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situation I hope you can send a collector as soon as possible and cleaners to disinfect our street. We are good citizens and we do not deserve to live in these conditions. Thank you for your attention on

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matter, I eagerly await your response. Yours sincerely, Maria Ilaria

jimeilariaWed Sep 18 2024

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coherence cohesion

To enhance logical structure, consider adding a brief introduction that clearly outlines the purpose of the letter before diving into the specifics.

coherence cohesion

To ensure each paragraph addresses a single idea, clarify the separation between the description of the problem and its effects.

task achievement

The letter effectively addresses each part of the task: describing the problem, explaining its effects, and suggesting a solution.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is polite and formal, suitable for addressing a local council.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate and respectful, aligning with the formality of the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

188 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rubbish collection schedule
overflow
accumulation
attracts pests
health hazards
unsightly appearance
foul odors
quality of life
reliable
frequent
community awareness programs
waste reduction
recycling
community composting solutions
organic waste
installation
public bins
strategic locations
littering
residential bins

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