The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter • describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • suggest what should be. done about the problem
Dear Mr Smith,
My name is Jimena, I live in Tugun, and I am writing to you in regard to the garbage collection system
that is
not working well at all. My neighbour and I are very disappointed with this
situation, as we have been living here for many years and this
is the first time that we have experienced problems with the rubbish
collection.
For some reason, the rubbish
collector is coming every two weeks instead
of every week, he is also
not collecting the rubbish
from every bin, leaving some of them that are on the street positioned in the right place to be collected.
Furthermore
, having an excess amount of rubbish
in every house is causing rats invasion. We do not know how to handle this
problem. So please, now that you are aware of this
situation I hope you can send a collector as soon as possible and cleaners to disinfect our street. We are good citizens and we do not deserve to live in these conditions.
Thank you for your attention on this
matter, I eagerly await your response.
Yours sincerely,
Maria IlariaSubmitted by jimeilaria on
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To enhance logical structure, consider adding a brief introduction that clearly outlines the purpose of the letter before diving into the specifics.
coherence cohesion
To ensure each paragraph addresses a single idea, clarify the separation between the description of the problem and its effects.
task achievement
The letter effectively addresses each part of the task: describing the problem, explaining its effects, and suggesting a solution.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and formal, suitable for addressing a local council.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and respectful, aligning with the formality of the letter.
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