You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine, In you letter • Correct the information in the article • Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear sir, I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to the terrible mistake that one of your writers made while he describes the location of my hometown in your magazine.

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, he wrote that Cairo has located on the north of Egypt overview the sea, while its location is on the north middle of Egypt and it has not any seaside.

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, it has a Nile river which through it. Indeed, I was shocked by

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wrong information which may cause confusion for tourists who decided to visit Cairo soon.

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, it is quite important for your magazine repetition your team have to be more accurate while providing a piece of specific important information. I suggest your writers collect more accurate information before presenting it.

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, it will be better to inform you before publishing to be sure if there is a need for the corrections. I looking forward to receiving your response to

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letter, and thank you for your time. Yours sincerely, Amira Elattar.