You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine, In you letter • Correct the information in the article • Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to the terrible mistake that one of your writers made while he describes the location of my hometown in your magazine.
Firstly
, he wrote that Cairo has located on the north of Egypt overview the sea, while its location is on the north middle of Egypt and it has not any seaside.
Nonetheless
, it has a Nile river which through it. Indeed, I was shocked by
this
wrong information which may cause confusion for tourists who decided to visit Cairo soon.
In addition
, it is quite important for your magazine repetition your team have to be more accurate while providing a piece of specific important information. I suggest your writers collect more accurate information before presenting it.
Besides
, it will be better to inform you before publishing to be sure if there is a need for the corrections. I looking forward to receiving your response to
this
letter, and thank you for your time. Yours sincerely, Amira Elattar.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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