You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine, In you letter • Correct the information in the article • Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to the terrible mistake that one of your writers made while he describes the location of my hometown in your magazine.
Firstly
, he wrote that Cairo has located on the north of Egypt overview the sea, while its location is on the north middle of Egypt and it has not any seaside. Nonetheless
, it has a Nile river which through it.
Indeed, I was shocked by this
wrong information which may cause confusion for tourists who decided to visit Cairo soon. In addition
, it is quite important for your magazine repetition your team have to be more accurate while providing a piece of specific important information.
I suggest your writers collect more accurate information before presenting it. Besides
, it will be better to inform you before publishing to be sure if there is a need for the corrections.
I looking forward to receiving your response to this
letter, and thank you for your time.
Yours sincerely,
Amira Elattar.Submitted by totyfatoona on
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