The internet has transferred the way information is shared and consumed. But it has also created problem that did not exist before. what are the most serious problems associated with th internet and what solutions can you suggest.
Advanced technology has changed the way news is received and reciprocated by the audience,sometimes creating issues in the society not noticed before.The main problems faced due to the
internet
is online gaming platforms without age
restriction and unlimited access
to the sites
are not advisable to young people.The solution for this
is to make the user share his details including age
and ban the sites
deemed not fit for them.In my view,such
restrictions will monitor mental health as well reduce the frequency of time spent watching it.
The Internet
gives access
to all people to share and view information.This
has led to misusing the sites
by younger people,who get addicted to online gaming platforms because of which studies are often neglected.For example
,the recent online game Roblox is a huge hit among college students,who are often seen in an internet
cafe surfing the game and neglecting college.Moreover
, the internet
gives access
to videos not advisable to the younger generation for viewing.Recently,it was brought to the notice of public broadcasting authorities that some adult sites
are not issuing age
limit certificates allowing children as young as 15 to watch it.These problems are noticed due to internet
usage.
These problems can be countered by limiting access
to some sites
and also
banning a few from broadcasting unhealthy videos.Sites
should request the users to upload documents verifying age
.For instance
,Roblox should ask the gamer to upload identification documents before allowing them access
.Also
,unhealthy videos and websites should be banned from uploading to the net.For instance
,crime and violent materials should be not covered as part of the news.These solutions will help in regulating the exchange of information for viewers.
To conclude, the internet
has become a powerful tool of communication in the modern world.The problem of unauthorised excess usage can be countered by banning and limiting access
through uploading necessary documentation.Submitted by rehanafees on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
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