You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter -describe the problem -say how long it has been a problem -explain what action you want the neighbour to take

#neighbour #-describe #-say #-explain #action

Dear. Mr Sweeney, I am writing to inform you that I am feeling really bothered with the parties you have been throwing every single weekend.

Thus

, I would like to make a formal request to you to solve

this

matter. As I am a lawyer, I have been working from home since the COVID pandemic started and I can not get focused enough to do my work with all the loud sounds you have been listening to all day long.

Furthermore

, I notice that even your guests are not the same ones, but appears to be totally random people coming in and out of our building, as I do not feel safe anymore, even in my own house.

Last

night, I even saw someone peeing in my doorway!

Therefore

, I would like you to diminish the volume of your box music so as to keep it hearable only in your apartment and do not bother the other neighbours and me anymore.

Moreover

, I am going to ask you to request your guests to show their identification documents before they get in our place so that we can feel safer knowing who has been in our gated community. I would appreciate your immediate attention to

this

matter. I look forward to receiving your activity response. Best regards, Anna Fraga

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

218 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter -describe the problem -say how long it has been a problem -explain what action you want the neighbour to take

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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