Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other while other think that people have become more independent.discuss both views and give your opinion.

Modernity

have

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changed the

world

since

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in

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the

last

decades and with

it

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,it

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society's have transformed.

Therefore

people

's interactions have

became

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weaker, resulting in more independent persons. Along with

this

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these

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changes in relationship

behavior

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behaviour

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, technology

have

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became

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become

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stronger causing effects in

modernity

interrelations.

Firstly

, is important to mention that some decades before

families

around the

world

were bigger, making

this

conection

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connection

between individuals stronger because

families

were more band together, sharing same interests, routines, place of living and jobs.

Now a days

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,

families

usually have

less

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fewer

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kids and their housing belong related to their jobs making

families

apart. According to a Harvard study, since 2000 it was

demostrated

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demonstrated

that

families

have many members living abroad or in a different city from their parents,

therefore

this

kind of distance develop on

people

autonomy and independence.

Additionally

, is impossible to

evaid

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avoid

evade

that technological growth

have

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parted society's, because

this

innovation

allow

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connections with

people

all around the

world

, consuming the attention that at

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first

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fist

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was given to a local place and now it is focused globally, making individuals apart because of their interests.

On the other hand

, there are some

people

that disagree with it and support that

modernity

had

delevoped

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developed

more dependency between persons, claiming that

societys

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society

societies

have

became

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more globalized,

therefore

they are more linked between them at economic, political and cultural issues. A clear example is the actual

of

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apply

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the performance of economy between

countrys

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countries

country

, in the Colombian case we are dependent

from

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on

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China economy. Making

this

country conditional on what happens on the other side of the

world

.

Finally

,

hilghligting

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highlighting

different point of

views

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view

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on the evolution of dependency in relations, I consider that

definetly

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definitely

modernity

have

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made

people

more

independant

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independent

as how it was decades ago. Making

families

and groups apart, caused at

first

because of the technology innovations we have had.