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In many countries paying things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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Nowadays, making payments via mobile applications is widely used globally. From my point of view, using
this
 kind of technology has more
benefits
 than drawbacks. In the essay,
both
 sides of
this
 development will be discussed before reaching a conclusion. On the one hand, it is undeniable that cutting-edge technology brings a lot of
benefits
 to societies. Particularly, changing the way of purchasing things by mobile applications. Customers can purchase and make
payment
 transactions faster and easier by using QR code
payment
. It is more convenient to secure
a
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payment
 by using mobile phone
apps
.
This
 will lead us to cashless societies.
In addition
, using
e-wallet
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an e-wallet
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 will give rewards to users which means they can redeem rewards and earn more
benefits
. Moving to the banking views, applying technology like mobile
apps
 will reduce
both
 operation and settlement processes.
Consequently
, it will cut costs for banks.
For example
, True wallet, a leading e-wallet
apps
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app
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 in Thailand, provides several features to make a convenient
payment
, like QR code
payment
 and scanning barcode.
On the other hand
, there are only
few
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 drawbacks
of
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 the usage of these
apps
.
Firstly
, it is not friendly to all users
such
 as elderly people, children,
disabilities
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 people, etc.
Secondly
,
although
theses
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these
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application
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applications
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 are provided by trusted banks or financial firms, frauds are unavoidable.
Therefore
, to protect
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against frauds
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frauds
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fraud
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,
a
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high security must be implemented.
For instance
, two-factors-authentication is
a
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mandatory for any
payment
apps
. Before users can
login
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log in
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these
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to these
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apps
, they have to verify their authentication
combining
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both
 something you know and something you have; sometimes using
user’s
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 biometric and user’s password. In conclusion,
a
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 development of electronic
payment
 has
both
 advantages and disadvantages.
However
,
this
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 advantages outweigh
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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 because
it
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they
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 created more
benefits
to
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for
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 societies.
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