Many people believe that social networking sites (such as facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays our society
have
been changed for the different negative influences but Change the verb form
has
this
have
carried bad impact on individuals levels. I agree as social Change the verb form
has
media
is the principal thing that people
watch today on their mobile phones. The main problem is a
individualist and superficial world.
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an
Firstly
, Some people
think that we have a big problem because the influences of social media
on our live
carried mental unhealthy. Replace the word
life
Besides
, this
may be seen in different psycologists
studies that show how have Correct your spelling
psychologists
psychologist
went
increased depression and anxiety in Change the verb form
gone
people
. Also
, this
might be because persons the most part of the day whatch
their cell phone to read the update. Correct your spelling
watch
what
For instance
, if a persons
is Change the noun form
person
addict
to social Wrong verb form
addicted
media
in the future they could have anxiety problems
or depression been a big issue.
Secondly
, is usually believe
that we are now more individualist than decades ago. As consequence, we have a superficial world and it can be seen Wrong verb form
believed
specially
in Replace the word
especially
younghts
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youngest
their
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they're
they are
allways
wants to be in touch and try to Correct your spelling
always
updates
their social Wrong verb form
update
media
, this
means that young people
do not speak or pay attention in Add the particle
to have
have
social relations. Change the verb form
having
For example
, usually in a meet with parents or friends younghts
watch their social Correct your spelling
youngest
media
instead
of speak with another
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other
people
generating a social issue.
In conclusion, I agree that social media
like facebook
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Facebook
twitter
are Change the capitalization
Twitter
a
bad Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
influences
on our Fix the agreement mistake
influence
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lives
life's
lifes
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lives
this
carry
many Change the verb form
carries
problems
in our daily routine. Also
, this
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these
problems
may rise to society level and might be a global problems
.Correct the article-noun agreement
problem
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