2) Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: • Your reason for writing • What you would like to happen • A nice, respectful style

Dear Mr Williams, I am writing
this
letter with regard to the sounds that your small puppy Bruno makes throughout the day and night. My children are worried about the small dog as they hear him day and night. They even asked me if the dog is in pain or he is hungry. Sometimes, it is difficult to answer
such
questions. At times, I even wonder why Bruno barks so much. I have read somewhere, when a small puppy barks day and night, it means he is missing his mother or any loved one. Clearly, to figure
this
out, we need to get
this
checked. We can take the puppy to the nearest veterinarian and get the proper checkup for his health.
Also
, a visit to the animal psychiatrist is
also
suggested to understand what he really wants to say.
Additionally
, we can watch several videos available online to understand dogs’ language and gestures.
By
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show examples
this
way, we can get to know why Bruno is behaving like
this
. Please let me know if you need any help. Yours sincerely, Andrew Wayne
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • disrupted
  • challenging
  • appreciate
  • solutions
  • training
  • anti-bark collars
  • excessive barking
  • resources
  • well-being
  • distress
  • amicably
  • cooperation
  • concern
  • neighbourly relations
  • understanding
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