In some country, students pay their college or universities fees, while in some others, the government pay for them. Do you think the advantages that the government pays the money outweight the disadvantages?

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paying the

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for college and university

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, while in most of the remaining countries the

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still have to pay for their own. In my opinion, I believe that the benefits of allowing the

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to pay the

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for

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exceed the drawbacks it brings. On one hand,

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will reduce the financial burden for the

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families. College and university

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are extremely high in many industrialized and developing countries.

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phenomenon has deeply affected the quality of

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lives, as their families can’t afford enough money to pay the

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fees

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and maintain a reasonable living standard for their children. With the

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’s financial support,

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families can now focus on improving the

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lives.

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,

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change

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allows

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to choose their desired school without hesitation about the costs.

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, more people will be able to develop their talents in their ideal environment, which can result in a significant improvement o

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the effectiveness of the education system. Admittedly, there are some drawbacks f

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movement. The

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responsible for paying the

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means that there will be less investment for other fields

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as technology development or s

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industry.

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, teachers will have lower salaries as the investment from the

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can hardly replace the income from the

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.

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, these problems can soon be tackled, regarding that the increasing level of education among the future citizens can create a quality source of l

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for many industries in the near future, while

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’s income and a

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them to increase the salaries of teaching. In conclusion, I firmly believe that there will be more advantages than drawbacks when the

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subsidize student in paying their study

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