Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There is an idea that says most
people
have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious Use synonyms
festivals
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Although
almost everyone that attends a festival wants to enjoy it, I believe that most of them know the meaning of the Linking Words
festivals
.
I will explain my opinion with two real experiences. Use synonyms
Firstly
, about traditional Linking Words
festivals
; in my country, we have a great traditional celebration every year at the beginning of spring, which is called Use synonyms
Norouz
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People
in Iran and some countries that speak Use synonyms
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the Persian language celebrate Change preposition
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Norouz
with special customs. Use synonyms
For example
, they completely clean their houses before Linking Words
Norouz
, buy new clothes and make everything new if it is possible. These behaviours come from an ancient belief, that says we must renovate everything all around us, like nature at the start of the year. There are a lot of stories and legends about Use synonyms
Norouz
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people
remember.
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Secondly
, I talk about a well-known religious festival in Iran and some Muslim countries, especially those which are Shia; The Moharram decade is a religious festival that most Linking Words
people
wear black clothes and go to the mosque and participate in religious ceremonies in that period. Most Use synonyms
people
, Use synonyms
however
, attend Linking Words
this
festival to please themselves, but almost all of them know the meaning of it. I believe that anybody who takes part in Linking Words
this
event knows its meaning.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the idea that most Linking Words
people
have forgotten the principle of the subject of traditional or religious Use synonyms
festivals
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite