you live in a small apartment building.You are frequently bothered by noise from your upstair neighbor. write your letter to your neighbor,in your letter Describe the situation. explain why it is a problem for you. suggest a solution
Dear Mrs Clark
My name is Kseniia and I am your neighbour. The reason I am writing to you is to report some problems with noise upstairs. As far as I know, there is your apartment.
To begin
with, I want to explain the problem. The noise I hear every night from upstairs does not let me sleep well. I am the type of person who needs peaceful and quiet surroundings to not wake up during the night. But I constantly hear sounds as if someone is jumping or something like that. Additionally
, when you are not home, your dog starts barking for many hours. So, during the day I cannot concentrate on my work and at night I cannot sleep.
Consequently
, I am not able to sleep at all. Moreover
, I tend to have nightmares and a lack of sleep in the morning. In addition
, I have a little kid who cannot sleep because of the noise which comes from you. And I am not the only person who complains about that; my neighbours and your neighbours are also
angry with that fact.
To sum up
, I want you to understand the problem and try to make an effort and reduce sounds.
You can contact me by number +380667459085.
I hope for your understanding and thank you in advance.Submitted by ksrnnn on
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coherence cohesion
Consider using a variety of sentence structures to enhance the flow of your letter. Although the current structure is clear, increased complexity could improve the overall coherence.
task achievement
To further enhance your task achievement, you might include more specific examples of the disturbances and clearly state how they impact your daily routine. This could make your suggestions for solutions even more persuasive.
task achievement
You have effectively described the situation and explained why it is a problem, which shows a good understanding of the task.
coherence cohesion
Your letter is well-organized, with each paragraph focusing on a single idea, making it easy to follow.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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