There is an increasing amount of advertising directed at children, encouraging them to buy toys and snacks. Many parents are worried that these advertisements put too much pressure on children, while some advertisements claim that they provide useful information to children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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A In the early 1990s, the
California
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Air Resources Board (CARB), the government of
California
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’s ‘clean air agency’, began a push for more fuel-efficient, lower-emission
vehicles
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, with the ultimate goal being a move to zero-emissions
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such
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as electric
vehicles
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. In response,
automakers
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developed electric models, including the Chrysler TEVan, Ford Ranger
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pickup truck, G.M.
EV
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1 and S10
EV
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pickup, Honda
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Plus hatchback, Nissan lithium-battery Altra E.V. miniwagon and
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RAV4
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. Ford Fusion was manufactured at ford’s Hermosillo stamping & Assembly plant, located in Sonora, Mexico. I thought going green was supposed to provide the U.S. with more jobs. The
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accused of pandering to the wishers of carb to continue to be allowed to sell
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in the lucrative Californian
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while failing to adequately promote their electric
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to create the impression that the consumers were not interested in the
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. All the while joining oil industry lobbyists in vigorously protesting CARB’s mandate.
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’s program came under particular scrutiny; in an unusual move, consumers were not allowed to purchase EV1s, but
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asked to sign closed-end leases, meaning that the
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had to be returned to
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at the end of the lease period, with no option to purchase, Despite lesser interest in continuing to own the
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. Chrysler,
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, and a group of
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dealers sued CARB in federal court, leading to the eventual neutering of CARB’s ZEV Mandate. C After public protests by
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drivers’ groups upset by the repossession of their
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,
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offered the
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328 RAV4-EVs for sale to the general public for six months, up until November 22, 2002. Almost all other production electric
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were withdrawn from the
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and were in some cases, it is seen to destroyed by their manufacturers.
Toyota
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continues to support the several hundred
Toyota
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RAV4-
EV
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in the general public's hands and in fleet usage.
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famously de-activated the few EV1s that were donated to engineering schools and museums D Despite their poor fuel efficiency thanks to lower gasoline prices. Throughout the 1990s, the appeal of fuel-efficient or environmentally friendly
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declined among Americans, who
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favoured sport utility
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, which were affordable to operate.
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automakers
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focused their product lines on truck-based
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, which enjoyed larger profit margins than the smaller
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preferred in Europe or Japan. In 1999, the honda insight hybrid
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became the
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first
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hybrid to be sold in North
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since the little-known woods hybrid of 1917. E In 1995,
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debuted a hybrid concept
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at the Tokyo motor show with testing following a year later. The
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first
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Prius
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, model NHW10, went on sale on December 10, 1997. It was available only in Japan, though it has been imported privately to at least the United Kingdom, Australia, and New Zealand. The
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first
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-generation
Prius
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, at its launch, became the world
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first
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mass-produced gasoline-electric hybrid
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. The NHW10
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styling originated from
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designers, who selected competing designs from other
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design studios. F In the united state, the NHW11 was the
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first
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Prius
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to be sold. The
Prius
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was marketed between the smaller corolla and the larger Camry. The published retail price of the
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was US$19,995. The NHW11
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became more powerful partly to satisfy the higher speeds and longer distances that Americans drive. Air conditioning and electric power steering were standard equipment. The vehicle was the
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mass-produced hybrid on the
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market
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, after the two-seat Honda Insight. While the larger
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could seat five, its battery pack restricted cargo space G The 2000s energy crisis brought renewed interest in hybrid and electric
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. Hybrids, which featured combined gasoline and electric powertrain, were seen as a balance, offering an environmentally friendly image and improved fuel economy without being hindered by the low range of electric
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, albeit at an increased price over comparable gasoline
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. Sales were poor, the lack of necessity for a fuel-efficient
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at the time. In
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, sales of the
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Prius
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jumped, and various
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followed suit, releasing hybrid models of their own. Several began to produce new electric
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prototypes, as consumers called for
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that would free them from the fluctuations of oil prices. H In 2000, Hybrid Technologies, later renamed Li-ion
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, started manufacturing electric
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in Mooresville, North Carolina. There has been increasing controversy with Li-ion
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due to the ongoing ‘lemon issues’ regarding their product. And their attempt to cover it up.
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electric-
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maker Tesla Roadster, which was
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first
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delivered to customers in 2008. The roadster remained the only highway-capable
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in serial production and was available for sale until 2010. Senior leaders at several large
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, including Nissan and General
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, have stated that Roadster was a catalyst that demonstrated pent-up consumer demand for more efficient
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.
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vice chairman Bob Lutz said the Chevrolet Volt.
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plug-in hybrid sedan prototype aims to reverse years of dwindling
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share and massive financial losses for
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’s largest automaker. In an August 2009 edition of the New Yorker, Lutz said, ‘all the geniuses here at General
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kept saying lithium-ion technology is 10 years away, and
Toyota
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agreed with us – and boom, along comes Tesla. So I said, ‘ How come some tiny little
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startup, run by guys who know nothing about the
car
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business, can do
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, and we can’t? that was the crowbar that helped break up the log jam.
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