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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Evidence suggests that eating an excessive amount of
fast-
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food
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 cause health problems in some nations. Some people argue that higher
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tax
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 on these kinds of
foods
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 should be imposed by authorities.
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, I completely disagree with the given statement because of some reasons which will be discussed in detail.
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, increasing
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 on fast meals has more impact only on certain income groups.
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 with, just poor families will not affordable to purchase fast
food
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. Simply put, a high percentage of people in society are in middle and affluent groups who are still able to pay more money to buy
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such
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 as pizza, burgers and french-fries to follow their desire so that
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 solution is less likely to be effective to decline consumption of
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food
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 and junk
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.
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, the state should
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 people about the drawbacks of these fast prepared dishes and provide healthy
foods
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 for them at
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 cost.
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, due to hectic
lifestyle
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 individuals prefer to eat fast
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. In fact,
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 is more convenient and faster rather than other
foods
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 and families might purchase it even with the growth in
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.
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,
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 has a straight
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 on people’s income. Take a person who is addicted to fast
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 as an example, there is no matter for them to spend more money on it without paying attention to the price.
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 government should boost the quality of
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food
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 products and make them healthier
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 of increasing taxes. In conclusion, I believe
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 intake more
fast-
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food
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 trigger health disease, implementing
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tax
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a tax
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 on these kinds of
foods
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 is not workable as
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 rule just targets poverty-stricken families and fail to prevent individuals from buying and eating it due to quick preparation and their appetite.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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