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chools should stop using books for teaching children as they find them.boring and use films tv and computer instead . to what extent do you agree and disagree?

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In
this
 essay, I will be touching on a few different views of mine on whether or not schools should stop using
books
 for teaching
children
 as they might find them boring and
instead
 use films,tv and computer, and ,
finally
 give my opinion on it.
To begin
 with, I think
books
 are a really good source of information, distraction-free and can be made fun as well by including illustrations or diagrams.
However
, using
books
 can be boring as well especially if they're not well presented since we know usually
children
 are better visual learners.
Also
,
books
 can be outdated in context with current scenarios I recall I've always been a huge fan of coloured
books
 and comics as a teenager, which kept my interest in them and had no urge to pick up school textbooks over them. So, using tv, films and computers can serve the purpose of making teaching a bit more indulging.
For instance
, schools could use animated videos or PowerPoint presentations to make things exciting in the classroom for
children
 who would
otherwise
 not pay attention to
books
. But at the same time, these methods can
also
 be distracting to kids they tend to steer away from the key objective. I recall growing up television meant video games to me, if done under the supervision of the elderly or teachers though,
this
 can be mitigated. As a final conclusion, I believe
books
 have their place when you want all the important references in one place as things could become jarring if
children
 or teachers had to search everything on the internet yet using films , tv and computer alongside them will be more stimulating and help to make things more clear. There are some public schools that have adopted
this
 method of teaching as it is proven to be more effective.
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