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The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

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In recent years the invention of the
internet
 has caused a threat to
hardcopies
books
 in schools.
Hence
, some
people
 believe that the
internet
 would not replace
hardcopies
books
 in schools. In my opinion, I agree that the
internet
 will not replace the old
way
 of studying in schools.
Hence
,
this
 essay will discuss why some
people
 will prefer to read
books
 online and why others would still prefer to study
hardcopies
 of
books
. To start with, the use of the
internet
 to study is increasing each year, the reason for
this
 could be for a number of reasons. One major reason would be the comfort of being able to study anywhere and anytime.
This
 is so because with the
internet
 being accessible everywhere and anywhere
people
 can easily go online and look up
books
 they want to read.
On the other hand
, some
people
 still prefer reading hard copies of
books
 the old
way
 because it helps them retain knowledge better.
This
 is so because for some
people
 to understand and retain knowledge while reading, they need to have a smell of the book which triggers memories.
For instance
, a friend of mine enjoys reading the old
way
that is
, studying
hardcopies
 of
books
 which he says the smell helps remember. In conclusion, the choice of studying online or the old
way
 by studying hard copies of
books
 is up to every individual preference that makes them assimilate better.
Hence
, either for the sake of easy access to materials via studying online or the ability to remember previous studies just by the smell from reading hard copies of
books
.
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