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In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children? Write at least 250 words

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As the 21st century continues to unfold, a growing percentage of couples in several Western nations are opting out of having
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 essay will analyze the merits and demerits behind
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 trend On the one hand, there are a number of drawbacks for childless households.
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, the
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 of civilization will occur at a rapid pace.
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, low earnings, health insurance, social assistance regimes, operating regimes, amusement, and enjoyment all put
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 strain on the elderly's social security system.
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, there are many social disadvantages. shortage of human resources is one of the important issues and needs to be solved quickly if the birth rate is to decrease.
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, Japan and Europe, which have a negative population growth rate, resulting
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 the recruitment of immigrants, associated with various social problems
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 as human trafficking and burglaries
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, families that tend to be childless often have many benefits from many aspects of life. Obviously, the state of health will not be threatened or exposed to any danger. Admittedly, if a woman does not go through the process of delivery, her health will remain constant.
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, with no
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 in the household, the couple's profession and money will be easier and more comfortable. Parents will not have to spend expensive money
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 as nanny rent, school fees, toys,...for their
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. Plus, adults do not need to waste time on kid-related tasks
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 as child care, feeding, taking
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 to play, teaching
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 to study, and so on. In conclusion, nowadays, in numerous Western countries, a rising number of couples are choosing not to have
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. Taking a glance at the previous points, I strongly believe that
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 trend is a good sign for a change in the world
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