Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea ora waste of time?
University
is one of the important Use synonyms
level
in Change to a plural noun
levels
education
system of all the countries in the world. Nowadays, lots of Add an article
the education
Use synonyms
student
decided to spend Change to a plural noun
students
1 year
gap before studying Add a hyphen
1-year
in
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at
the
Correct article usage
apply
university
in order to pay a Use synonyms
vist
to other countries or obtain more Correct your spelling
visit
experiences
for work . In my Fix the agreement mistake
experience
oppinion
, Correct your spelling
opinion
this
is absolutely a great idea and in Linking Words
this
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essay
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,essay
i
will explain why .
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I
First
of all, travelling can help Linking Words
students
broaden their Use synonyms
mind
in many new environments before they attend Fix the agreement mistake
minds
university
. Use synonyms
For instance
, Asian Linking Words
students
who come to American for Use synonyms
visting
or relaxing can approach many new Correct your spelling
visiting
culture
, they observe foreigner’s Change to a plural noun
cultures
action
and Fix the agreement mistake
actions
behaviors
when dealing with things. Because of Change the spelling
behaviours
that
they imply into their daily life, Add a comma
,that
unversity
after that Correct your spelling
university
wont
Add an apostrophe
won't
be
a difficult task for gap year Change the verb form
is
student
. Use synonyms
Beside
Correct your spelling
Besides
students
have to study at least one language during their Use synonyms
traveling
time, Change the spelling
travelling
it
build up their Correct pronoun usage
which
confident
and Replace the word
confidence
diplomatical
skill .
Correct your spelling
diplomatic
Secondly
, many Linking Words
Use synonyms
student
Change to a plural noun
students
spend
a year Correct pronoun usage
who spend
to work
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working
also
shown that they are more potential in their future jobs. Whatever it is a part-time or a full-time job, Linking Words
Use synonyms
student
will gain more experience Fix the agreement mistake
students
such
as in dealing with customers, coordinators, coworkers. Linking Words
For example
, if they sell coffee they will know how coffee drinks are made, how to serve the customer and which attitudes should they give to others. Linking Words
Additionally
, in some Linking Words
jobs
it Add a comma
,jobs
also
has certain confirmations to put in your CV and from Linking Words
there after
Correct your spelling
thereafter
Use synonyms
university
they will have more opportunities cause most of the interviewer’s requirement is experiences.
In conclusion, it is a good idea for many Add a comma
,university
students
to spend Use synonyms
1-year
gap Correct article usage
a 1-year
instead
of Linking Words
study
directly at the Wrong verb form
studying
university
after high school because it not only opens their Use synonyms
mind
to new cultures, builds their language skills but Fix the agreement mistake
minds
also
gives them more experiences to support their career path.Linking Words
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