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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea ora waste of time?

#students #gap #year #university #travel #gain #work #idea #ora #waste #time
University
 is one of the important
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 in
education
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the education
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 system of all the countries in the world. Nowadays, lots of
student
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students
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 decided to spend
1 year
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1-year
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 gap before studying
in
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at
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the
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apply
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university
 in order to pay a
vist
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visit
 to other countries or obtain more
experiences
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experience
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 for work . In my
oppinion
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opinion
,
this
 is absolutely a great idea and in
this
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i
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 will explain why .
First
 of all, travelling can help
students
 broaden their
mind
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minds
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 in many new environments before they attend
university
.
For instance
 , Asian
students
 who come to American for
visting
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visiting
 or relaxing can approach many new
culture
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cultures
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, they observe foreigner’s
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actions
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 and
behaviors
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behaviours
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 when dealing with things. Because of
that
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,that
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 they imply into their daily life,
unversity
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university
 after that
wont
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won't
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be
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is
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 a difficult task for gap year
student
 .
Beside
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students
 have to study at least one language during their
traveling
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travelling
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 time,
it
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which
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 build up their
confident
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 and
diplomatical
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diplomatic
 skill .
Secondly
 , many
student
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students
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spend
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who spend
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 a year
to work
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also
 shown that they are more potential in their future jobs. Whatever it is a part-time or a full-time job,
student
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students
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 will gain more experience
such
 as in dealing with customers, coordinators, coworkers.
For example
, if they sell coffee they will know how coffee drinks are made, how to serve the customer and which attitudes should they give to others.
Additionally
, in some
jobs
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 it
also
 has certain confirmations to put in your CV and from
there after
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university
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 they will have more opportunities cause most of the interviewer’s requirement is experiences. In conclusion, it is a good idea for many
students
 to spend
1-year
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a 1-year
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 gap
instead
 of
study
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studying
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 directly at the
university
 after high school because it not only opens their
mind
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minds
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 to new cultures, builds their language skills but
also
 gives them more experiences to support their career path.
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