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Pollution is becoming a major environment problem what are causes and solutions to solve this 
problem?

#pollution #environment
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The most alarming environmental issue is
pollution
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 in the present era. It is mainly because of
traffic
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 congestion and deforestation.
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, there are a number of solutions that could be implemented
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 as stringent rules for
traffic
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 control and tree plantation campaigns. Prominently the reason for
pollution
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 is
air
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 contamination by dust and hazardous gases like carbon dioxide.
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, an increase in the number of vehicles, which run on petrol or diesel emits
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 gases that pollute the
air
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.
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, because of the growing population, people are in need of more land.
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, they cut jungles and that results in the loss of green trees and fresh
air
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.
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, in India, the city 'Mumbai' became a jungle of cement with huge skyscrapers and tremendous
air
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pollution
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 made residents suffer from various
air
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-borne diseases. There are two effective solutions. One way to tackle
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 is to ensure that the strict rule for
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 control should be implemented. The vehicles should be checked regularly to avoid
air
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-
pollution
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. By doing
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 the
air
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 quality will definitely improve and so the human life. Another method of dealing with
pollution
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 is, encouraging tree plantation.
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 can be done by motivating school children and other people to plant a tree, nurture it so that it could provide clean and healthy
air
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 into the atmosphere. To exemplify, 'Chandigarh', a city in India developed man-made forests in the city which makes it not only look beautiful but
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 incredibly diminishes
air
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pollution
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. In conclusion, tree-plantation and
traffic
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 control are effective ways. If implemented properly, the
air
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pollution
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 due to vehicles and deforestation would be controlled.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution
  • environmental problem
  • causes
  • solutions
  • industrial emissions
  • vehicular emissions
  • improper waste disposal
  • deforestation
  • stricter environmental regulations
  • renewable energy sources
  • waste management systems
  • planting
  • trees
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