Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some authorities argue that improvement in
sports
facilities
is the best way to increase
public health
rate rather than other measures .Sports
have their own importance but this
is not the best way because there are other requirements like improvement in hospital facilities
and measurement of public health
level
which can beneficial for people
fitness rise .
Sports
are an important part of people
's lifestyle and they can help in multi-way . The main reason to support sports
activities is that not only help to stay fit but also
gives relaxation to a person in his/her life .In addition
, These help in people
overall development like say's that healthy mind rises in a healthy body , a person can focus much more on her/his task .For example
, Nowadays many parents motivate their children's for sport , moreover
, they also
participate with them . This
senior helps to improve the overall fitness of society .However
, Sometimes not every person is able to participate in sport due to age or work-life .
There are other aspects like improvement in hospital facilities
and free medical checks which are more effective to increase
the public health
rate .Hospitals play a major role in people
's healthy life as they save their life and also
help in the prevention of diseases . At the same ,time free medical check-up helps the government in the creation of new policy for the public .For instance
, In India government has started free health
check-up camp in the ruler area every year which help them not only help to create new policy but also
help to understand on which level
their policies are successful and what are the new requirements.According to ,that they can raise the level
of hospital needs in the ruler area .
In conclusion , I think sports
are helpful to personal individual level
but that is
not the best way compared to the increase
in hospital facilities
and measurement of people
health
levels. Because for an overall increase
of health
rate required rise every one health
standard.Submitted by jinaltamboli2608 on
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