International travel is becoming cheaper than before, so more and more countries open their doors to tourists. Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

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The advancement of science and technology has led to the availability of mass transit for all the means of transport, as
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, travel is now cheaper.
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due to the benefits of
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many nations are now more open to foreigners though, some believe that it is of disadvantage, I do believe that the increase in
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is more of merit than a demerit.
Tourism
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is of great economic and educational advantage for society.
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, many nations get their major income from
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by generating revenue through tax.
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tourists are usually not very prudent as they tend to spend freely while on holiday. Travelling is
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of great educational advantage as it enables travellers to learn about the different cultures of the world and see sites that they could have only read in books.
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, it may foster respect and appreciation of other people's way of life and in the same vein improve the economy of countries. The progression of
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may be of certain disadvantages like increase in crime rate and environmental degradation.
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, nations that have tourist attractions in local areas may experience an upward trend in robbery incidents.
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is not only because the visitors are vulnerable by being in unfamiliar places but
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due to the display of expensive items like cameras and jewellery by the foreigners.
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, many visitors destroy natural sites like the beach due to the improper disposal of their waste, as
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leads to the pollution of these resources.
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,
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does not override the educational, economic and cultural benefits of
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as these disadvantages can be controlled. To conclude, having discussed both ends,I believe that, while there are certain demerits that comes with visiting other countries,
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, the benefits are more predominant. To
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end, I believe, that the disadvantages can be curbed and they are not enough to outweigh the educational and financial advantages of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • local businesses
  • job creation
  • cultural understanding
  • stereotypes
  • global connections
  • infrastructure
  • public transportation
  • environmental degradation
  • pollution
  • deforestation
  • wildlife habitats
  • commercialization
  • cultural identity
  • overcrowding
  • quality of life
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