International travel is becoming cheaper than before, so more and more countries open their doors to tourists. Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

The advancement of science and technology has led to the availability of mass transit for all the means of transport, as
such
, travel is now cheaper.
Also
due to the benefits of
tourism
Add a comma
,tourism
show examples
many nations are now more open to foreigners though, some believe that it is of disadvantage, I do believe that the increase in
tourism
is more of merit than a demerit.
Tourism
is of great economic and educational advantage for society.
For instance
, many nations get their major income from
tourism
by generating revenue through tax.
Also
Add a comma
,Also
show examples
tourists are usually not very prudent as they tend to spend freely while on holiday. Travelling is
also
of great educational advantage as it enables travellers to learn about the different cultures of the world and see sites that they could have only read in books.
Consequently
, it may foster respect and appreciation of other people's way of life and in the same vein improve the economy of countries. The progression of
tourism
may be of certain disadvantages like increase in crime rate and environmental degradation.
For example
, nations that have tourist attractions in local areas may experience an upward trend in robbery incidents.
This
is not only because the visitors are vulnerable by being in unfamiliar places but
also
due to the display of expensive items like cameras and jewellery by the foreigners.
Similarly
, many visitors destroy natural sites like the beach due to the improper disposal of their waste, as
such
,
this
leads to the pollution of these resources.
However
,
this
does not override the educational, economic and cultural benefits of
tourism
as these disadvantages can be controlled. To conclude, having discussed both ends,I believe that, while there are certain demerits that comes with visiting other countries,
however
, the benefits are more predominant. To
this
end, I believe, that the disadvantages can be curbed and they are not enough to outweigh the educational and financial advantages of
tourism
.
Submitted by Mimi4real360 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • local businesses
  • job creation
  • cultural understanding
  • stereotypes
  • global connections
  • infrastructure
  • public transportation
  • environmental degradation
  • pollution
  • deforestation
  • wildlife habitats
  • commercialization
  • cultural identity
  • overcrowding
  • quality of life
What to do next:
Look at other essays: