Some people think that criminal behaviour has genetic causes. Others believe that it is circumstances that lead people to commit a crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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According to some, criminals commit a crime due to genetic characteristics, while others disagree and state that the reasons for
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actions lay on the surface. I believe that genetics is slightly involved in criminal
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, and we should rely more on the circumstances of each case and its offender.
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with, some psychologists and ordinary people tend to think that crime has a genetic connection and we should pay more attention to those children, whose parents were in jail or had a suspended sentence.
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, some genetic illnesses may become a reason for an offence.
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, according to the research of the Russian sociological agency, 35% of juvenile delinquents were born and raised in families of former criminals.
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, most famous maniacs like Ted Bandy or Andrey Chikatilo, soviet serial
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, had different mental disorders,
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as bipolar disorder or psychopathy.
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, there are tons of examples, when a criminal was born in a rich lovely family, had everything that they need, but still committed terrific homicides. As well as in families from poor
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or in families with repeated offenders children grow up being honest and decent, and not being involved in any crimes.
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year Kirill Grechkin, a son of the Russian millionaire was accused
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and was assigned for 7 years. In comparison, Roman Abramovich, who is the owner of the football team and the Russian oligarch, was born and lived in jail for 5 years because both of his parents were scammers. Those examples illustrate the absence of connection between social status and determination for committing a crime. In conclusion, some criminals have genetic features that may push them into the world of criminality.
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, I suppose that we should take into consideration external reasons over internal ones.
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