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Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success, while others believe that it depends on other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In Life, no matter what profession is chosen or what kind of activities we involve in, ultimately we expect Happy living. There are arguments that the amount of happiness is directly proportional to financial status on hand, and
on the other hand
, it is stated that being happy is inclusive of many variables of life.As far as I am concerned, many factors ranging from
health
 to relationships contribute to peaceful living. Economic status is primarily rewarded for the state of being happy because it enables
people
 to full fill their requirements.The factors that are considered while calculating the happiness index is education,
health
 , nutrition levels which are merely dependent on money.
For instance
, A family that could support their kids' education and
health
 in all circumstances and
also
 affordable to occasional trips stays without any stress.
Conversely
, Some Folks say that happiness depends on our approach to seeing the world.
Health
 plays a key role followed by the
people
 surrounding them. No matter how wealthy the person is, if he has no
people
 to share the feelings or if his body did not cooperate to enjoy worldly pressures, it makes no difference from being in Manson or hut.
People
also
 need time to enjoy what they have earned.
For instance
, there is a man in our neighbourhood, who is the owner of crores of property.Despite being so rich, he claims that never in his life had a peaceful sleep, due to the loss of his beloved wife.Though paid nurses take care of him when he is ill, he misses those emotional bondings. So, I consider money as one of the tools to achieve contentment, but alone can not be considered as the means. Well organized lifestyle, Good family and friends along controlled financial needs
promotes
Change the verb form
promote
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 Happy living.
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