Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the advance of technology allows
people
to study and do the
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research
in all aspects of business
and Correct article usage
the business
academic
world. Correct article usage
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, the research
can be freely published in
many kinds of Change preposition
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platforms
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Additionally
, some people
believe that it is beneficial to the people
to share the information
freely while some people
argue that the information
should be limited to certain
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a certain
group
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groups
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It is undeniable that with today technology, Change the article
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people
can access a lot of information
through the internet whether it is relevant to their business or the general topic. It is specifically beneficial to young
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, if they see that the topic is already existed
in the world, they can learn from it and explore another area that Change to the active voice
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it
has not yet been studied. Correct pronoun usage
apply
This
way can shorten the time to do research
since people
can study from available resources. It results in there will be many available researches
and published in many different areas of study.
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types of research
pieces of research
kinds of research
However
, it has some drawback
as well. Fix the agreement mistake
drawbacks
First
, some studies contain sensitive information
which should not be shared to
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with
public
. Add an article
the public
For example
, medicine or health research
should be limited to educate
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education
person
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people
Second
is that there are some Correct article usage
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people
who intend to copy work of the others, and free sharing information
will encourage them to copy research
easily.
In conclusion, I personally believe that there are both benefits and drawbacks to share
as much Change the verb form
sharing
as
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apply
information
as possible in the present time because there are both people
who have good intention
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who do not properly use the available resources.Correct pronoun usage
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